I believe Bill means...
The little computer arpeggio starting at 44 secs with the echo on it. And I agree, it's a bit too low in tone for this track, really muddies up the low mids. But the idea was good for a change of pace in that section, maybe try to find a sound with a bit less low and bit more high that floats through the high mids instead. Good track overall though.
Peace
Holy shit, I haven't heard from you in a minute. I'll have a listen to it later when I get home.
EDIT: I see now what you are talking about. Not sure how I missed it in Bill's review.
Remember kids...
He could be poppin' his hole right now.
Good track, far better lyricism and recording quality than the competition...if you can call him that. Funny shit how he's so secretive about his whereabouts, his face, his everything but he cries himself into a blind rage when someone tells him he won't find them. In fact, isn't their a video of him extolling the virtues of being transparent and giving out your address and how Spawn was such a weakling for not doing the aforementioned? Too bad he is now saying "You're not gonna find me".
And again, he could be poppin' his hole right now.
Peace
thanks for the review...lmao thats how fucking fake that n***a lej is.lol you whats funny old man that n***a almost ya same age.lmao...stay up
Linezo for sure
His style, delivery, punches, everything were on-point for the track.
Linez: No real issue anywhere in this, except the first verse was filled with the same "Everyone on NG is a nerd" breakdowns, which is funny since you're on NG and in an NG competition. I understand, you're battling and knockin' on what you assume are Jiroh's "weaknesses", but that's the played out, overdone verse materail I would expect from someone with less experience. The second verse was on-point again in delivery and flow, but there was the "15 years old and still in ya mama's house". Great punch with the "Joey" line, but really knockin' on a cat because he ain't got his own apt. at 15 is just stupid.
Jiroh: Flow is good, delivery at times seems mechanical and "read from the paper". This was a good track from you and you hit on some points that were good for you, but Linez is experienced and against him you were really outmatched. I give you a year, maybe two, and you'll be there, but right now, he won it. Keep working on the delivery and recording to break out and get a bit more emotion in your spit.
Linez for the win.
This is a battle...
Not a competition about who spent more time with doubles and adlibs.
Murdaa: Your words were too fast throughout this piece. Alot of your words were lost in the slurs. I understand you didn't respect this battle enough to care, but that shows that you don't deserve the win. Every battle is worth the time if you _accept_ it, which you did when you entered. On top of that, the 4 bars before the final 2 bar section were so slurred it was unintelligible.
Wyze: You brought punches to the battle, but your delivery and flow are off still because it does sound many times like you are reading the verse rather than feeling the verse. The last 8 bars, though, were so much better delivered and planned out. That's where you made up alot of ground in my eyes against Murdaa because you hit him in the spots I just described he was weak in, like a real battle artist would.
I give the win by a slim margin to Wyze for knocking on actual points his opponent is weak at, while Murdaa pulled out the usual suspects, so to speak, of leaving someone in the alley and mumbling alot of his lines because he was trying to move too fast for his own delivery.
Turn down the chorus adlibs
They are a little too loud. Maybe double record, pan hard right, hard left with a bit of reverb and lower volume to push them back in the mix. Otherwise, good re-mix from what I heard of this way back. Great flow, great pacing, timing and delivery. This was a great track from the three of you.
Peace
Definitely will be doing that in the next couple of days. Thanks dude
Someone g-g-g-g-got mad at this track
Shhhh...he's still hiding in his mom's apartment crying over lost love.
Good track, I was wondering what you would do with this instrumental. Good lo-fi, like Billy said. My only problem was the volume levels of the vocals was a tiny bit too hot through the verses. Otherwise, good quality across the board.
PS: I swear, I'm working on "Storms", really. I'm trying to make sure it's perfection before releasing it and it's going into the MNSP Spring mixtape as a Bonus track.
Love it
My only complaint was that the kick was too weak. I downloaded it, layered in two 808 samples and wrote a 16 to it, recorded and mixed it down and today I uploaded it. Really, great track with the one exception, you need to put up more so we can hear the other side of the Wyze/Darwin experience a bit more.
Peace
Go ahead, boy, come at me.
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