Not bad at all
Instruments mesh alright, but there's not alot of sonic seperation between the saw instruments. You need to open the track up with some keys, strings, anything other than a saw. That will give seperation, clear up the muddy central theme, etc. Drums are good, actually, prolly the best part of the track.
Keep at it and don't be afraid to play around with sound and READ up on production from reliable sources. Not everyone produces the same way, but there are some things that everyone can learn to improve, like splitting your sounds into high, mid, and bass tones and not muddying one EQ range with too much generic sound.
And don't listen to Nibiru...anyone who reads Zechariah Sitchin enough to use a reference from him for a username doesn't have much hope of being musically inclined.
Peace